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The only reason I would read this would be if the story focus more on MC’s relationship with his dad’s, his jealousy for the love his dad gave someone else, and the trauma of seeing his dad leave for gravity girl. But instead of writing a heartfelt story primarily about Mc and dad’s relationship, the entire story consists of mc hating gravity girl because he was jealous, gravity girl doing some dumb shit, mc solving the problems that gravity girl made while warming up to her. It dances around what could have been a very emotional and meaningful subject