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it lacked staying power
needed the MC to step up and be more compelling and interesting and it didn't happen. Why do all these authors start with such super cool openers only to not translate those characteristics into later chapters.
needed the MC to step up and be more compelling and interesting and it didn't happen. Why do all these authors start with such super cool openers only to not translate those characteristics into later chapters.