So good that I read it again, having already read J.Potachan's version. Nice work, it's certainly not lacking in any way... though I prefer Potachan's writing and style.
Thanks for all the hard work you put into 50-something pages with full sfx.
I know it has nothing to do with the manga, but I'm genuinely amazed at the level of quality of the scanlation. From the redraws, the SFX, the typesetting and the consistency of it all. Great job