APPROXIMATE - Ch. 17

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ngl, these corporate politics are so confusing and I have no clue whats going on. Also half the characters look identical.
 
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@skilodracus Had that same conclusion it's like 9 pages of blabber to get to that fact that she's "celebrating her victory with that woman" which we obviously knew was going to happen from last chapter.
 
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I don’t know what’s going on but fengtang’s ass looking phat. And tf is Yuxi doing at the director’s house.
 
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I would like to punch Manager Lin.

ALSO WEI YUXI get the fuck outta there. I’m 99% sure author’s going to give her some form of a redemption arc or a perfectly good reason for her actions, but I legit still can’t get over what she did to Fengtang, so I’ve never rooted for her all that much. And yeah, there’s so much corporation and business shit. ;-;

Anyway, go fuck ‘em up, Shang Jie!
 
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I have to say that I don't think Yuxi is doing something with her. I think that she is taking a bath, but the cliffhanger is good.
 
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Is the main ship even sailing? And why does this plotline seem so shallow..
It's overcomplicated and with too much unnecessary details, we don't care about the company, and most of the talk could be resumed in one or two pages, instead of talking so much use the art for God's sake..
They had a great moment to emphasize the "bad guy's" arguments, like when he said "you don't know her last" or something like that, there could have been a flashback that made us understand why he hates her so much.. but instead we just get his rant about how he doesn't like the Devil and stuff..
It's the same bullshit we already heard before and it's tiring to see this character being used just to move the plot forward..
By the way, the main couple barely interacts, and when they do there isn't an ounce of empathy shown.. they all just have poker faces, like if one's supposed to fall in love as time passes there could be little hints sprinkled through the story..
But there isn't..
Even with facial expressions, we now the author can do it.. but the lack of facial expressions gives a boring and monotonous tone to the scenes..

I.. usually don't really care as long as there's a good story.. but omfg it's so boring seeing they talk about their company.. I can't be the only one to think this way


Thank you so much for the chapter, I really appreciate it, even frustrated, the second couple is so captivating that I can't stop reading, thank you for making this available <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
 
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I've read a lot of amateur stuff, but I feel like this is one of the weakest ones. We've had sexual assault, weird rich family problems, dead(?) ex-lover, car crash, and now all sorts of office drama with no real sense of pacing or actually doing anything with any of these things. Like the author wants to do 5x what they can fit into their schedule but still trying to shove it in. And I'm sure there's more that I forgot.
 
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??? I don't understand how people are confused as to whats going on

1. Someone leaked old project
2. Mc working on new project cause director told her to do it
3.Side girl talking to the director because she want's in on w.e director is planning
4. Asshole dude shows up bitching about everything and trying to start chaos within the group(Because I think he is the one who leaked the project and dudes been trying to fuck director over for a while)
5.It ends with it making it seem like side girl is cheating on best girl with the director and that the director is fucking everyone over so she can switch companies

which is fucking ridiculous since we saw the flashbacks and we KNOW that one of side girls BEST TRAIT is that she's faithful to her lovers or person of interest hence she'd never go after the director
 
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Oh wow, a whole chapter of nothing.
I really do want to see our main ship sail, but this is excruciating!
 
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all i got from this chapter is "project dis, project dat, project der..." which just makes the story lost
 
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Interesting to see people confused over the plot, it was always complicated to understand because it wasn't watered down and simplified for dummies. Rather than looking for a cutesy and kissy yuri, maybe actually pay attention to the characters and details of the overall story. Pay attention to why the project is important for the two MCs and how switching companies and abandoning your old company/employees could be seen as betrayal which would affect their overall view of the director. If you can't even do that... then iunno what to tell ya...
 
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LOL these comments are sending me. If you wanna see two girls have sex, there's plenty of hentai sites for that. Don't blame the author just because you're unable to comprehend office jargon. This is necessary context to develop the characters and story. I am actually grateful the author is attempting to add depth rather than simply focusing on the romance of the MCs. How would it be different from any other story if that's all it did?
 
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thank you for the translation its nice seeing how their work lives will and can influence their love lives, although that product placement did hit close to home. I'm excited to see how this continues to develop.
 

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