Arrested Love - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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I made a mistake on the 4th page it should be "i’m sure she’ll be able to find something to help her"
 
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help me get a fricking jp-en translator. I'll mass release 10 chapters within a week if you do so. here's the discord link - https://discord.gg/ndd6jvunR7

I'll spam this link in every chapter's comment section until I get a translator
 
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Thanks for the update, please continue translating this manga really love it. Thank you translators can't wait for the next update.
 
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@cloudtaku - good overall work. Some improvements:
Pg1: comma after plus. "Bloomin" should (IMO) be boomin' (business is boomin')
Pg3: IMO, after "because of.....", should maybe be restructured to "....fraudulent group here causing the female customers to suffer." Just to make it flow and sound better I think (if other native english speakers can chime in).
Pg4: Arigatani? Is that a pet name for Arigaya?
 
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@mitsauce I guess Arigatani is the real name of Arigaya. I am not sure as google is really fricked and thanks for the advice
 
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@cloudtaku, you may want to supplement Google with https://www.deepl.com/en/translator

I've found it often has more natural sounding phrasing and sentence structure.
 

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