@cloudtaku - good overall work. Some improvements:
Pg1: comma after plus. "Bloomin" should (IMO) be boomin' (business is boomin')
Pg3: IMO, after "because of.....", should maybe be restructured to "....fraudulent group here causing the female customers to suffer." Just to make it flow and sound better I think (if other native english speakers can chime in).
Pg4: Arigatani? Is that a pet name for Arigaya?