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That's not very assassin-like, everyone has many openings, and the protagonist's strength is overemphasized.
- Assassins take advantage of any weakness as much as possible, he is closer to an honorable warrior.
- Evil princess can easily get slashed on many occasions, protagonist literally risks himself being "mesmerized" like an idiot, and the group's naivety is constantly being taken advantage by their adversaries.
- The protagonist is strong but not as strong as how much the author wants us to think he's strong. S. T. R. O. N. G.
- Assassins take advantage of any weakness as much as possible, he is closer to an honorable warrior.
- Evil princess can easily get slashed on many occasions, protagonist literally risks himself being "mesmerized" like an idiot, and the group's naivety is constantly being taken advantage by their adversaries.
- The protagonist is strong but not as strong as how much the author wants us to think he's strong. S. T. R. O. N. G.