Attacking the Girls' Dormitory of the Demon King

[Kainius]

What a total s**t show from beginning to end. It's clearly the work of someone who had a really great idea for a story but had no idea how to execute it. I hope they take some time, write smaller stories and get better as they do have potential.

 

[Leffty]

Ending was definitely lackluster, and at volume 8 it started getting rushed. Otherwise I think this is pretty cute yuri manga.
Strong 7.
Only real sad part is that MC never had real chance to talk to her sister again.

 

[noolly]

I finished the whole thing a couple months ago and went back to see the comments for fun,
And, if you still haven't read this, then I'll tell you this, it's not worth your time, it's extremely long, and quite boring, and filled with annoying misunderstandings.
Then why did i read the whole thing?
I was intrigued, curiosity killed the cat,
And i forced myself to read this.

 

[F4taL]

This has interesting plot in the beginning, but feel rushed and doesn't really make sense at the end

 

[NeroTesla616]

Wait.....thats it? the fuck? that ending was aaaaasssssss

 

[Kyarrak]

This was always rough but earnest, but then spiraled into the author just jumping from idea to idea with little cohesion and ends with barely any closure. Credit to the translator but no idea how I found this to read in the GL Manhuas. Still, every story read is A Journey.

 

[lanlan_yuemao]

i feel like if the author had like, 170 chapters to work with instead of 90, and just used that to clean up the mountain of loose plot threads, then this could easily be a 9/10.

everything after the demon king section really felt like the author was being rushed to fit a timeline instead of writing their story. so many ideas were started but left unexplored.

Spoiler

especially wish more time was taken to explore the implications with Marcia’s soul being stuck in Lisa’s body together. would have loved to see a few chapters exploring how that situation could affect their relationship as they search for a solution.