Automaton - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - The Start of Training

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Typo on page 33: "preperation" >> "preparation"
Typo on page 40: "efect" >> "effect"
Typo on page 63: "extremeties" >> "extremities"
 
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Really loving the mc tho. But Automaton powers are still a bit vague man. And I bet the main villain is an a.i created by the "not Tony Stark" and the mc father.
 
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In essence they kidnapped his grandma too, and forced him to sign a contract taking advantage of his vulnerable situation, because if he doesn't firms he will lose the one chance he has to save his grandma.
Man his fathers colleagues are a bunch of assholes, and they are still not explaining why they kidnapped him, they even have the right to deny him meals based on combat performance.
And these guys are the ones trying to "save" the world.

Wonder when they will put a collar bomb on him?
 
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thank you for the taking the time to work on this. This was fun. It also reminds me how much I miss Zipman and EX-ARMs and was disappointed by Zipman's rushed and unsatisfying conclusion do to it's untimely and unwarranted axing
 
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The woman with the monocle, exept for the color of her hair, looks like his mother.
 

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