Baby Empress (Promo) - Oneshot

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In all honesty, she looks like she's related to the boy emperor instead of her own father and brother XD
 
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I'm sorry but it looks a little weird to me. She looks like she's five and marrying at this age and as an empress idk what to think about it
 
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this is like: I am a Child of this House, Monster Duchess and the contract Princess and The Youngest Princess. all fused together but in a weird and confusing way....
 
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😂😂I literally was laughing when she ask him to marry her and he was acting as an adult 🤣😅 and kind of weird out 😨
 
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Oh that demon lady was really pretty.

But this wasn’t a very good one shot to sell the novel. It’s very confusing and I have no idea what’s happening. Hopefully if it gets picked up they’ll be able to make the story more coherent.
 

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