Bakemono no Kimi ni Tsugu, - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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[Oeconomist]

Shitty pacing and exposition dumps.

 

[Tasha_Godspell]

Good character and plot but needs better execution (not the murder kind)

 

[Nogon]

Shitty pacing and exposition dumps.

Good character and plot but needs better execution (not the murder kind)

Bear in mind, these are all Sherlock Holmes stories.
They seem to be trying to keep these relatively short and succinct.

 

[Chizan]

Bear in mind, these are all Sherlock Holmes stories.
They seem to be trying to keep these relatively short and succinct.

The problem is they're stacking bricks without any mortar, the story flow lacks any kind of cohesion..