Barrag - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[kadzooks]

Oof, that translation is rough as sandpaper

 

[Mokrath5918]

Oof, that translation is rough as sandpaper

Yeah I had to stop after a few pages. Impossible to pay attention to the art or follow the story in a meaningful way.

 

[asdfgh1111]

Oof, that translation is rough as sandpaper

Yeah I had to stop after a few pages. Impossible to pay attention to the art or follow the story in a meaningful way.

I had to start actively ignoring the text, it was so bad. It's too bad because the art was really nice.

 

[jipowap]

Word soup

 

[hellknightofdeath]

The story is completely incoherent, even CONSIDERING the bad translation (or typesetting, since this is listed as being originally in English). The art is really good though.

 

[NicholasTurner]

Looks interesting, at least from what I could parse, for a rough draft.
If this is the final product I want my money back.