You can cut off 30 chapter of this just by removing all the "daddy girl" "clutch shot" "poking kitty" "pizza face" "froggy" "I'm not playing" lines. You can cut off 50 more chapters if this just by removing all the stupid philosophy and feelings moments.
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OH!! What age are they again? 14? The older is, what, 15? I love a 15 years old kid with long hair and long thick beard, addicted to nicotine and with complete knowledge about weapons, hacking and the government lol
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And Elvis wannabe... air guitar and singing really get you muscular huh?! Those guys are more muscular than Guts from Berserk. The villain boy is more undestructable than that melty robot enemy from Terminator 2...