How fascinating. Was not expecting a full handdrawn SFX RD from a random group on a random oneshot. Are those CSP brushes, or did you add the effect yourselves? That said, a lot of the handdrawn stuff is very poorly aliased. You can see the sharp pixel edges, especially on the Grrr's in the second half of the chapter. The strokes are also heavily aliased too. Typically you would handdraw the text at a higher resolution and then downscale, but I don't know if that would be compatible with the brushes you are using (I am assuming it is CSP). Some of it looks particularly MS-paint-y, honestly.
Other than that the SFX themselves look great.