Beyond 23 Seconds

[MangaDex]

 

[Derpthenerd]

it's alright so far, but could have been far better with more exposition imo. especially for such an esoteric person and plot, the story just feels a bit clinical as of now. this person does this, for this reason, add some philosophical ramblings on how this connects to a feeling of disconnect to reality or contributes to the flawed noosphere etc., next plot point. these are the basics of writing, i get that, but the vibes are just off on this one

 

[Cosmism]

it's alright so far, but could have been far better with more exposition imo. especially for such an esoteric person and plot, the story just feels a bit clinical as of now. this person does this, for this reason, add some philosophical ramblings on how this connects to a feeling of disconnect to reality or contributes to the flawed noosphere etc., next plot point. these are the basics of writing, i get that, but the vibes are just off on this one

I read it years ago in a single sitting and I thought it was brilliant. I think it's the kind of story that should be treated as a oneshot or graphic novel. It's not much of a serialization as it is a singular experience. Sorry if that doesn't make much sense, it's late and I need sleep.

 

[n3na3]

Simply peak. Read and you will find yourself enjoying.