Thanks for picking this up! The only things that really jumped out to me as proofreading errors are a few times words were pluralized but shouldn't have been (ie, 'that doesn't sounds like being an outlaw' on page 10 or 'why do you have this much paperworks piled up again'. I'd probably have gone with 'why's so much paperwork piled up again' or just 'why do you have so much paperwork piled up')
