Blue Hearts - Vol. 2 Ch. 17 - Heroes Incoming

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So the Hishiron-like girl has a trauma about suicide. Hope the author can explain this and their problem can be solved.
 
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"If you come closer I'll jump!"

It would be funny if she just jumped normally without moving
 
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@givemersspls just take a look at recent NGT 48 scandal. that some fucked up shit. the victim of assault and stalking had to apologize because talking about it. that's some bullshit right at there.
 
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The same is true of mental health. It's a society obsessed with public image.
 
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I feel so bad for laughing this chapter:
"Did you ever see her trembling?" "No".
"Each of us needs to take three of them!" "There's only 6 though." "You guys are definitely repeating a year."

Why couldn't the author start with something like this? The same dynamic shown with his old friends could've worked.

Fun chapter though. Feels like the story's actually starting now.
 
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These developments all feel a bit stilted and forced. Everything was moving at a snail's pace and then the author kicked it into overdrive. Can we meet in the middle instead?
 

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