Blues - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[kohelemon]

Art shows promise, dialogue which works, aside from few weird uses of words. This is a good start. This actually has shown me the effect of longs strips. Nice!

 

[BakedBanana]

Art is not bad, but I can see some grammar mistakes with pronunciations and how they are capitalized, though it's not enough where it makes it hard to follow the story so it's passable.

 

[williamk22]

Art is not bad, but I can see some grammar mistakes with pronunciations and how they are capitalized, though it's not enough where it makes it hard to follow the story so it's passable.

Thank you! It’s great to hear it’s not too distracting, I’ll try to clean that up for a smoother read.

 

[williamk22]

Art shows promise, dialogue which works, aside from few weird uses of words. This is a good start. This actually has shown me the effect of longs strips. Nice!

Thank you! I’m glad you like it! I’ll refine the words, learning as I go. Long strips save me some time from panel design. 😄