Boku no Kawaii Musume wa Futago no Kenja: Tokugi ga Debuff no Teihen Kuro Mashirube-shi, Sodateta Futago no Musume ga S-rank no Dai Kenja ni Natte Sh…

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The translation has no noticeable english grammatical errors and doesn't feel like significant meaning is lost. Also your typesetting is nice. All round decent work, except you, dear translator, should keep on hand a list of character and place names, and standardize your localizations to be internally consistent. Especially grinding when the main character's surname changes spelling every time they invoke their magic. Is it Barbalodge, Harbalodge, or Halbaroge?
 
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So they're either using their own powers or the spirit's power to look back at the past before the MC adopted them?
 
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The translation has no noticeable english grammatical errors and doesn't feel like significant meaning is lost. Also your typesetting is nice. All round decent work, except you, dear translator, should keep on hand a list of character and place names, and standardize your localizations to be internally consistent. Especially grinding when the main character's surname changes spelling every time they invoke their magic. Is it Barbalodge, Harbalodge, or Halbaroge?
Thanks for the compliments! I actually already do have that and spend time trying to keep it consistent. If not, it's likely a spelling mistake I just missed. For your specific example, it should be Halbaroge 🫡. I checked Vol. 3 and 4, but I couldn't find a spot where it wasn't used, so if you find a spot, please let me know!
 
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INB4 it changes to a 30+ chap flashback. :notlikethis:
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i have cried everyday bc of how bad these authors are, not the translators but the creator themselves why do every time i find a good premise its always ALWAYS executed like you used a club to do it
 
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They just discarded the first flashback and then started another one? Astounding :dogewow:
 

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