Bouryoku Banzai - Ch. 24 - Frustration

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Learning to open it up and stand up for himself would be the healthy thing to do but beating up randos really gets the blood pumping 😔
 
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Thank you for translation, fun chapter-introduction, but please, fix double-spread page, it would look so much better with it stiched.
 
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See, I disagree. I hope every fighter gets a chapter dedicated to them just before we fight.
For sure, I'm loving this, it's like the Most Evil Death Row Convicts arc in Baki, except hopefully they can plot a little tighter than the Baki dream logic style.
 
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Reminds me a little of a shortened version of Shigurui. Getting to see more context about a persons life before they fight is cool to see in my opinion.
 
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See, I disagree. I hope every fighter gets a chapter dedicated to them just before we fight. I already barely care about them, at least try to make me.

Depends how many fighters they plan on introducing
 
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Depends how many fighters they plan on introducing
True, but imagine we're in a tense situation, things are looking rough. And suddenly, in the next chapter, we are introduced to a random like this one, and in the chapter after that, they come bursting through a wall to make it worse.

The format has so much potential to shake things up and fuck with the reader.
 
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True, but imagine we're in a tense situation, things are looking rough. And suddenly, in the next chapter, we are introduced to a random like this one, and in the chapter after that, they come bursting through a wall to make it worse.

The format has so much potential to shake things up and fuck with the reader.

This... feels like the format of the final chapters of JJK. Sukuna's kicking ass, character's backstory is shown, character shows up to get bodied, repeat xD

I know that's an... extreme example. But I do get what you're saying, my only concern is managing the pacing. Cause going from a cliff hanger to a character intro is gonna bother me if the intro ain't fire.
 

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