Boy Skirt

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Ends before it ever really gets going. Unsatisfactory ending, but everything up to that point was pretty good.
 
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Damn it, man! 😩

It ended in two volumes! TWO VOLUMES!?

And it ended with a sort of friendship ending too!

All those interesting support characters being introduced are all wasted!

Why!? 😭
 
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He could’ve at least confessed. I wish there were more of this. Oh well, it’s a good read
 
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Only reason this one got higher than 5 is because I respect Hachimitsu Scans. An MC who literally couldn't deal with a single problem (read: conflict) in the story without the help of contrived coincidence, characters introduced to artificially increase tension and create conflict with no depth and relevance to the narrative otherwise, 2 entire volumes of character development leading to "hey, let's stay exactly where we were at the end of the first chapter and make the entire story a complete waste of time"...? Yeah.

Some authors should really stick to oneshots with interesting premise rather than trying to milk as much story as possible out of some nice gimmicks with the hope that good art will carry the rest of the story.
 
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Fine read overall, but ending just murders entire plot.
Did author just have no spine to "cross the line" or something?
 

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