Aoe Nagi supremacy 🙏🙏Everytime I tried to drop this, I always come back. Nagi Aoe's charm has just too much of a pull for me.
Aoe supremacy but damn her childhood’s rough.Aoe Nagi supremacy 🙏🙏
I actually was going to make a comment exactly like this, because this manga really stands out to me as an example of the kind of drama I end up always being disappointed by (although I tend to enjoy the genre otherwise), and I think I can articulate personally what went wrong. For the record, I like parts of this story. I even think some of the character beats really work. But I think the totality of the story is... way too much. So in return, I think I have written a little too much.Have you ever heard that phrase in movies or inspirational quotes that says "You need the bad moments in life to recognize the good ones"? I believe rather than being useful to someone with depression, it's better used as an example on writing dramatic stories. You NEED contrast, nuance, a way to ground it in reality where good and bad things happen all the time. The best stories that involve tragedy and drama I have read, I can perfectly describe as a "rollercoaster of emotions". This one, on the other side, is a cart on a downward slope that sometimes changes inclination, but it only goes down.
The biggest problem I have with stories that are only about how much suffering the characters can take, is that they very quickly become exhausting to read. And worse, the author may also run out of ways on how to be dramatic,
Bro really said:"aight lil bro how about I actually speak like I know what I am talking about" 🤣🤣🤣I actually was going to make a comment exactly like this, because this manga really stands out to me as an example of the kind of drama I end up always being disappointed by (although I tend to enjoy the genre otherwise), and I think I can articulate personally what went wrong. For the record, I like parts of this story. I even think some of the character beats really work. But I think the totality of the story is... way too much. So in return, I think I have written a little too much.
The change to your point I would make is that stories like this don't inherently need "good" to offset the bad, because that isn't always applicable in stories with this dark a tone. Objectively good things may feel out of place or opposite to what the author is trying to achieve. Specifically what these stories need are for their characters to experience victories. So in this way, think of the roller coaster as ups and downs between individual victories and failures/general bad events and disappointment.
What I mean by this is that the characters need to want things, be unsure if they will get what they want or be challenged for it, and then sometimes actually succeed. Not knowing if they will get what they want or when is what drives the dramatic tension that keeps the reader unsure what will happen, and which characters will be at highs while others are at lows. Best of all when the desires directly oppose one another, or have indirect repercussions for other characters when they are realized. That's drama 101. And these desires don't have to be good things at all! Dramatic characters can want awful, fucked up things, and should still get them, because this is what breaks up the monotony of disappointment and general dreariness.
There is no drama if you always expect the worst to happen, and it does. This ties into what you say in your comment about the need for stories like this to constantly raise the bar and try to do worse and worse things. A minor setback often hits harder when placed along a narrative upswing than any awful tragedy can at the tail end of a long list of preceding tragedies and sorrow. I call the latter effect "dramatic noise," when the actual events occurring lose their context because of how the story has been treating them.
I can singlehandedly say my issue with this story is the characters are not interesting enough to watch long-term, and I think this is because the defining things they want they absolutely cannot get until the very end. Some of them work, kind of - the teacher imo is among the more interesting - but the main content of this story is just dramatic noise. Think about how often that turns out to be the result with premises with this; the main character wants to kill himself, or escape, and if either of those actually occur the story will end. So instead of coming up with meaningful characterization in the meanwhile, you do a lot of wheel-spinning, a lot of emotional angst and talking about backstories, and call it drama. It's not, at least not in my opinion.