Burning Effect - Ch. 12

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@Kaiofficialone, it'd be too soon for she to defeat the main rival so far.. I don't she would win. Notice she lost agains the kid. I expect more worldbuilding or character development, even if I'm hype for the next chap... Go for it Burner!!!
 
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@ukimix

I think the best story come when the hero must struggle to attain greatness. Losing just comes tags along with it.
 

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