@spicadays pg 28 "Even after yesternight." could maybe be "Even after last night."
pg29 "An assault on olfaction." just sounds weird. Wouldn't using "An assault on my nose." or "An assault to my sense of smell." be easier to understand and sound less awkward?
Also, to anyone curious about the quiz. It's asking about which song listed below is better than Sài Yǎrén song (Toot noise, I bet.). Very rough translations of the song titles are A. Sis, you are beautiful. B. Godly couple. C. (This one's abit confusing. I did kinda fail at written Chinese (Better with spoken Mandarin tbh and only took Simplified anyway.) Speed into the land/soil. D. (Even worse) Bǎi sù (Not sure what this means and lil sis is asleep. She's better than me at our mother tongue, lul.) searching for me. Maybe it's hundred mornings searching for me?