By a Deity's Side

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The name is By a Deitys Side, but there isn't much scenes that Xiao Bai is by her side,
Maybe the author is focusing on Xiao Bai first but.. I wish there were more scenes of them together.. It's not like they can't be seen together, they're both portrait as classmates on the same school and nobody knows she is a Deity apart from Xiao Bai.. That alone would create a bond only they have and secrets only they know, they should be at least more close to one another, at least that's what I think..
For a Deity I feel like she is exactly that, just a deity, but as a character she hasn't developed much.. Yeah she took a liking to Xiao Bai, to the point of breaking those laws they have for gods but she didn't do much besides that.. In the following chapters she is just there, she is helping Xiao Bai wich she is supposed to do.. but even when something happens to Xiao Bai and she gets angry, It doesn't feel right.. I mean, if she likes Xiao Bai so much why not show her feeling in some sort of way throughout the story..
I want to at least speak about what I felt reading this because this has the potential to go a long way.. but as the story progresses so far I feel like if every chapter has bored me until I saw the main characters.. I might not be at the best state of mind to read this.. but something doesn't feel right, and I'm not talking about the eyes lol.
 

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