Byakuda no Hanamuko - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

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This series is just so good in the way it is handling these mysteries, they are giving us just enough with each chapter to keep us intrigued whilst also still hiding so much from us.

Thanks or the translation Pizza Man
 
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Image 11, Shizuku says her sister advised her that she could become friends with Tsubaki.

The translation uses "messy-haired one," "fluffy stuff," and "strange-feeling stuff" (and possibly others, I didn't check) when the Japanese always uses the same phrase. English readers aren't going to necessarily get that these all refer to the same thing.

Images 19 and 43 are lower resolution than the rest.

You use both Kana and Kanna when it should be the latter.
 
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Man, I'm glad that Shizuku joined. The first 3 chapters were annoying because they got too many pages and everything was spent on Byakuya being obnoxious and refused to tell Tsubaki anything. One sided flirting isn't really my thing.
So, it's nice that Shizuku broke the routine and progress the story. It would have been nice if this happened in ch 3 though.
 

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