Capture the Golem and Escape Poverty - Ch. 2

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Why does he just find a metal hammer and pickaxe out of nowhere how's he gonna find that when the world should be panicking about monsters. And why are none of the characters showing worry like a full city has just disappeared like a nuke went off because the MC wished it away and hes just gonna wake up next morning and be like, oh I need some money like you just killed thousands of people like bruh
 
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@SumTingWong02 I'm writing a comment not an essay. I think you get the gist of what I was saying, when writing a comment my first thought isn't "oh was the punctuation & gramma right".
 
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huh, props to the writer. i've seen a ton of mcs strengthen their resolve then heroically win the battle but this is one of the first i've seen regret the decision and actually turn back
 
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where tf did he get a pickaxe ??? those thigns hella expensive you got that kinda money?
 

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