Fed-Kun's army
- Joined
- Jan 10, 2023
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- 27
This has been really great! It's such a refresher reading these 2 and I'm excited as hell to see how it goes. I think the biggest aspects that make their relationship feel so fun to read are:
the lack of focus on the idea of romance itself and trying to define their relationship in words, and putting more focus towards showing their day-to-day relationship
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treating intimacy/sexuality and physical closeness super casually (chapter 2 was my favourite)
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akane feels incredibly down to earth; both her and aoi don't really hold back or feel shyness no matter what they're talking about or doing and she doesn't feel like shes put on much of a pedestal (they can trade insults or banter with eachother, and unlike a lot of other manga there's very little focus on how beautiful or popular she is)
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most of the manga is pure dialouge; there's very little interruptions with long stretches of thought bubbles so the conversations flow great
the lack of focus on the idea of romance itself and trying to define their relationship in words, and putting more focus towards showing their day-to-day relationship
-
treating intimacy/sexuality and physical closeness super casually (chapter 2 was my favourite)
-
akane feels incredibly down to earth; both her and aoi don't really hold back or feel shyness no matter what they're talking about or doing and she doesn't feel like shes put on much of a pedestal (they can trade insults or banter with eachother, and unlike a lot of other manga there's very little focus on how beautiful or popular she is)
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most of the manga is pure dialouge; there's very little interruptions with long stretches of thought bubbles so the conversations flow great
