Chotto Dake Ai ga Omoi Dark Elf ga Isekai kara Oikakete Kita - Ch. 30.2 - end

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Look the NSFW version was the better story. Like the biggest problem in this story is that for 99% the MC does not treat the Female MC as a love intrest.
Yeah, when you strip away the hentai and try to stretch the story, it really becomes apparent how the author has no idea how to do romance or plot. The thing with hentai is that the target audience doesn't really notice how much real estate the sex scenes occupy within the pages, so it's easy to fill it with sex when you don't have anything else to say as an author. In a conventional manga, you don't have that convenience, so you have to be a better writer.
 
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@murimsite Hey, can you go edit your uploads to add them to volume 5 so they can be organized on the series page? Thank you!
 
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Well, thats it. Honestly, should have ended with both the dark elf and Sakura as his wifes. oh well.
 
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I'm not a reader so seeing the "END" tag on this chapter caught so off-guard lmao. So this mangaka got an anime adaptation and decided to end the manga almost immediately after? lol

and you know what? That's totally fair. From hentai to sfw and then all the way to anime, that's quite the journey. All power to him if he felt like this was the time to close the story. I think i'll go back and read it all from the beginning just to see how this journey unfolded
 
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Thanks for finishing this TL. I can't believe the others dropped it when it was actually this close to the end.
 
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Was it implied that Sakura has kids?
Or am I just reading the phrasing wrong?
 
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A bit underwhelming ending with the tired "fmc taken by an evil spirit" but okay manga overall (we still got the other series with demon lord coming to human world to get hero's kid that has more promess).

At least:
Hinata didn't get pounded by futa bell like in 18+ version heh!
 
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I guess that's not technically a bad ending, but not the good ending I was hoping for. ty for the translation.
 

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