trying to show that both are masochists which they areC'mon its fine when abuse is portrayed as just abuse, point blank. There's no need to glorify it. What's with those cutesy fluttery panels?
That's not what I had in mind. I feel kinda disappointed.trying to show that both are masochists which they are
idk about a rival unless rumi and rino start beefing over him (seems improbable)The author needs to give Rino a legitimately powerful rival or adversary, otherwise the only dramatic tension will involve the author coming up with new ways for her to abuse her victims, and that will get old before long.