Dex-chan lover
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Ok, this is going to be fun. Hope this goes 100+ chapters.
I like the idea that each chapter he thinks he finally understands her, goes to confess, only to find a new and worse aspect to her.nah for this to be interesting to me she should actually be a bad person with real bad points and not just "kind of foul mouthed and slightly short-tempered". give me some real shit like smoking or stealing.
or maybe let's just not subvert any tropesAuthor shouldve made her more callous during her temper tantrum moments in both chapters. Really home in on the "asshole playing the part of an angel" aspect of her. Because the tidbits of her showing her true, nice self is kinda self-defeating (especially this early on).
Like, i get it, we as an audience need to root for her, but as of right now i am just seeing a nice girl who puts up an asshole front to defend herself, which isn't really a subversion of any tropes- this is just remixed tsundere.