Classmate no Moto Idol ga, Tonikaku Kyodou Fushin Nan desu - Vol. 2 Ch. 10 - Love and Friendship

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Of everyone on Toyone, open shot, the fate of the universe on the line, the Martians have the death beam pointed at earth, you better hit it, I WANT YAMAMOTO​

 
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There are several typos in this chapter, in characters' names. There are two “Katayuki”s, a “Saeguisa”, and a “Wtarube”.

Also is it “Watarube” or “Watanabe”? The next chapter uses the latter, this chapter uses the former.

Plus:
  • “giving advice from both”
  • “you compliment me like that makes me really happy”
  • “Takayuki's usually height usually gives us”
None of those phrases are grammatically correct.

There are 1-3 other things to comment on, but they're rather minor.
 
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