This is... Yikes.
You definitely need a native English speaker, the word choice is all over the place.
For example, "That left me stunned." Would definitely be "That surprised me."
Or "I gave it a good thought" is up in the air but I'd write it as "I thought it over real well" or something among those lines.
While the diacritics are technically correct, they're not standard and definitely break up the flow seen especially when its not even covered by the font you're using.
Also, the kerning is terrible, on one of the pages an elipses was rubbing up so tight against some of the text I thought they were diacritical marks.
Also I noticed this with your other releases, but the random coloring is extremely out of place. I don't find it particularly well done and the downgraded quality is really noticable. I'd suggest putting it at the end of the chapter after a credits page.