Code Geass: Oz the Reflection - Vol. 5 Ch. 19 - A Promise Beyond the Smoke of Battle

[MangaDex]

 

[CrocodilShu]

Quick note on the font:

I’ve been tweaking the formatting as I go, so you’ll see the size jump between the first and second half. I prioritized readability for smaller screens over making sure the text fits perfectly in the bubbles.

I know how annoying it is to squint at small text on a phone for example. That said, does it look too out of place and is the tradeoff worth it?

Feedback is appreciated!
(I still have all the PSDs saved, so I can easily change the whole chapter if its a negative change)

 

[Dverin_Oshiban_Duren]

Can't tell if Schneizel is actually smart or stupid. Seeing those goofy faces in a serious chapter was funny af.

Quick note on the font:

I’ve been tweaking the formatting as I go, so you’ll see the size jump between the first and second half. I prioritized readability for smaller screens over making sure the text fits perfectly in the bubbles.

I know how annoying it is to squint at small text on a phone for example. That said, does it look too out of place and is the tradeoff worth it?

It's all good, thanks for the extra care. 👍

Feedback is appreciated!
(I still have all the PSDs saved, so I can easily change the whole chapter if its a negative change)

Amazing, so I think there should be a comma after "I" in the last panel on page 28 but maybe she's just talking real fast and on page 62 Schneizel should be saying "Are you badmouthing my father". That's it from me.

 

[CrocodilShu]

Can't tell if Schneizel is actually smart or stupid. Seeing those goofy faces in a serious chapter was funny af.

In the anime Schneizel felt abit more flat, they made him more interesting in this manga imo.

Amazing, so I think there should be a comma after "I" in the last panel on page 28 but maybe she's just talking real fast and on page 62 Schneizel should be saying "Are you badmouthing my father". That's it from me.

Made page 28 to "I, Head Knight Oldrin Zevon, command you!!!" for visual seperation to make reading it easier, thanks for the tip.
Fixed 62 too.