Dance in the Palms - Oneshot

[Yukizakurasou]

I watched the first episode of Birdie Wing, but there was too much action for my blood

 

[gearoi92]

You’re really a moron, Mangadex doesn’t even have a ‘true’ yuri tag, only GL.

What a great argument, i can't believe someone with your intellect actually interacted with me.

 

[Ichaivalrose]

God bless Microsoft tech support. Never lets me down

 

[erin4]

cute and all, the relationship really said by the last sentence of the bubble

 

[feha]

It would be much better for you to get your hateful shit out of here.

Really? Personally I found him hilarious cause he can't deal with seeing a male, even if fictional and on the other side of the screen, without feeling upset xD
Makes you wonder how they deal with seeing a crush or ex (or even celebrity they are a fan of) getting another boyfriend

Though he does have a point in that yuri is superior, as there are no males to kill the boner with. What? Perv! I clearly meant the one in the heart

all jokes aside, I think his actual issue here is how the majority of the chapter was ntr (well, technically bst (binary search tree? Man, I have a terminal case of being unable to be serious and not make bad jokes...) or whatever that genre was called), projecting the frustration solely on the fact that it's a male character.
And I do agree that I don't like that muddy feeling of seeing the mc being played, or main love-interest being 'stolen' (what a shocker, someone agrees that NTR is a bad genre! :O). If you want to do NTR in a story, don't do NTR , do netori instead. Or have the main-character be the one being stolen (like in "My Girlfriend's Not Here Today").

 

[PsychoTheRabbit]

I mean... a happy end of sorts. The premise wasnt nothing new tbh but since is a oneshot it doesnt have proper time to create a substantial frame for their relationship. Like, sure, Kasumi already really liked her but not in that way. The way it had to end it still make it seem like Kasumi would just go to whoever loved her more but her own feelings are something pretty shallow.
Aki did get what she deeply want it all this time so its a convenient happy end for both. The question is for how long? If only had enough time for Kasumi fall in love too and choose Aki on her own or even have that implied somehow...
Things werent that bad but using the boyfriend last scene to force Kasumi choice was an awful decision, almost like Kasumi was using Aki feelings to get back on her awful boyfriend. Instead of the whole bar ordeal it could had used those pages to let Kasumi feel things for Aki.
Tho i guess the author wanted to focus on being play around when u're in love with someone and that he did with Aki then being the actual victim in the end.