PG 22: "They didn't came here" (Should be come)
PG 28: "The backpack in that shelf" (Should be on)
Also, a lot of this stuff needs commas and rephrasing. Scans themselves and the typesetting are good though. It's readable, all things considered, and better than DitVB getting neglected.
Anyways, need moar, and to know what the fuck is going on.