Dandadan - Ch. 213 - Okarun's Resolve

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what a petulant child you are lmao
"waaaah my fiction doesn't match my exact specifications waaaaaaah"
“Waaaah someone has a different opinion than me and is expressing it waaaaah! I can’t handle people who don’t think exactly like me waaaah!”

God forbid I don’t enjoy an overused trope that is almost never satisfying and very rarely done well.
 
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the arc isn't even halfway through. ffs let the story play out before jumping to childish conclusions. i have a feeling when the arc is over you'll realize what a retard you were earlier on.
I personally think this arc has so far been well written. These chapters feel like they handled her amnesia in a decently interesting way.

But also the very premise sucks so the entire thing sucks. It feels like a very transparent way to stretch the time before our two protagonists start dating or having any kind of romantic relationship, a string that has already been stretched to its limits. You can't take the premise out of the equation, and the premise just mars the whole story.

So even if this whole amnesia affair ends up in a narratively satisfying conclusion, it will still have been an amnesia arc that feels like padding, you cannot escape that.
 
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I personally think this arc has so far been well written. These chapters feel like they handled her amnesia in a decently interesting way.

But also the very premise sucks so the entire thing sucks. It feels like a very transparent way to stretch the time before our two protagonists start dating or having any kind of romantic relationship, a string that has already been stretched to its limits. You can't take the premise out of the equation, and the premise just mars the whole story.

So even if this whole amnesia affair ends up in a narratively satisfying conclusion, it will still have been an amnesia arc that feels like padding, you cannot escape that.
Yep, exactly, this entire arc feels like frustrating padding. Even then, the whole amnesia aspect feels very unnecessary to achieve whatever Tatsu is going for. Everything that happened with Okarun this chapter could have been done without Momo having amnesia. Just simply have Okarun try to confess/express his feelings to Momo and continually chicken out at the last moment, leading to Momo trying to pry whatever he was trying to say out of him. Then, have her storm off in frustration when he won’t open up to her.

Like you said, the writing itself isn’t an issue, it’s just that the simple concept of doing a memory loss arc sucks. I’ve read probably close to a thousand manga and I can’t remember a single one where I actually enjoyed a memory loss plot point and thought it enhanced the story.
 
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1st pages :

just like i suspected : more netorare baits :

- main male brat takakura : evil-eyes brat is acting like an idiotic clown , and he is making main b!tch smiles , that means she loves him more than me . i will just go home and cry alone .

last pages :

and then main brat is crying like a little b!tch .

he is a pathetic ugly stupid ball-less coward , a pu$$y , a stalker , a liar , a mind-changer .
 

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