Fair. But yeah, I would rather go with what the author thinks is personally funny to him AND benefits the story.I disagree. In the old version, Miku seems to have earned the approval of the Satou family because of her quick, even if unnecessary, reactions as a guard student. Even Sensei could get away with her behavior saying that she was simply acting out a role passionately.
I think the author just couldn't write a good punchline to finish the scene, especially since in his retconn announcement, he mentioned that the route he was on did not really make him laugh like all his previous jokes did.
Sumire getting another full barrage of friendly fire... Sou is honestly provoking it.
Molester AClassmate A sure took a good, long sniff during hug time.
But I have to say, Sumire's reaction is also hilarious, telling him off.
...and honestly, Sou has an excellent guard team.
...you bet they all wish to be part of that household even more. Sumire's blog follower count might rise after this. Because Sou outing her behavior like this pretty much confirms Sumire's Ottouto Log as truth.
I wouldn't be surprised if Ako turns out to be her real name too.I am glad that Erika-sensei was allowed to keep her job and sanity. Miku still got her chance to shine, but ... you are holding your weapon wrong, Miku. The biggest offender is standing in the back of the room.
Classmate A deserves a sniffing license ... or at least finally being named.
I always thought her name was Eiko, female given name and is pronounced A-koI wouldn't be surprised if Ako turns out to be her real name too.
She's also the number one wife (in her mind)It's good to be reminded that Miku is still, and has always been, the number one guard student.
Don't just think about the moment, this will make whatever happens in the future better for the storyUnfortunately the author previous chapter made me aroused by delusional women. I give the rewrite a 6/10.