What did you think when I started this?
Amateur work but not unwelcomed one, was expecting you to drag colouring 1 chapter per week/month and eventually call it quit.
It is good to see you being stubborn with colouring and see that perseverance yields a good result, as how it should be with artist recipe of practice makes smooth.
Now on this chapter, colouring on the rails looks pretty bad, perhaps you might want to redraw them. With what you can do now, it should be an easy extra work.
Another thing to say, the pages where the girls are delusioning are looking too rough compared to your usual quality, wonder why is that.