Danjo no Yujou wa Seiritsu suru? (Iya, Shinai!!) - Ch. 12

[Derksy]

In japanese it means more that you have no game/experience with girls than actual sex.

Well, yes, I know that but you still can't escape the real meaning of the word. ^^

 

[asphyxiav2]

You misspelled Himari's name wrong about half of the time. In the last chapter as well. I guess this is a remnant of the MTL output. Definitely read everything twice, before and while pasting it on the page.
Rion's name is also wrong once, I think that is just a typo.
Since you don't translate it, I think it would look much better if you cleaned the page blotter as well (which is just a rectangle select, inverse and delete).
Lastly, try to maintain consistency in the fonts a bit more. For example: in the last panel on page 11, you reduced the font width so that it wouldn't overlap the face, which was a good decision. It would look more consistent if you had also used the same width for the left part. Alternatively, you could ignore the raw's layout and use the space above his head with less wrapping.

I think I've mentioned this before, but will you really not consider recruiting a proofreader? I think it would be much less work for you than re-uploading the pages multiple times after comments here on MD.

I'm sorry about those mistakes and I'm only scanlating using an Android phone so I really can't do much about cleaning. About the himari name, I don't know a lot of kanji yet that's why I'm relying on mtl when it comes to kanji but I learned that the the name of the fmc in kanji is read as himari so I'll be careful from now on. I'm really sorry about the inconveniences, thank you for your advice, I will strive to do much better work in the future.🙇‍♂️

 

[DementisXYZ]

Hoo boy, she became annoying in one fell swoop, didn't she? Didn't inform him of where they're going, why, or who with (honestly, if I were him with so little information, I would've declined), then keeps being pushy and a brat at every turn. She's a fun character, but these two chapters are knocking her likeability down a decent bit.