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The whole problem here is that he wasn't.Author is at the mercy of his editors more or less.
The whole problem here is that he wasn't.Author is at the mercy of his editors more or less.
I'd argue that version was more "plotsy" than this one we have now.Yes, I am aware of the pre-serialization where Agawa gets creampied and mind broken by the fat teacher.
I am referring to this version here, which was supposed to be the "plotsy" version without the hentai.
From the looks of it, the author got bored of the plot and wants to go back to the hentai version.
How do you know that?The whole problem here is that he wasn't.
How do you know that?
Please do not take this question as an insult, I legitimately wish to know how you know that this version published in an official manga site, yanmanga, does not have an editor.
damn it's possibleI'm guessing MC will reject her and she'll be so sad that she'll end up getting fucked by another dude.
It's sick and twisted, but I wouldn't put it past the author for doing this.I'm guessing MC will reject her and she'll be so sad that she'll end up getting fucked by another dude.
It is implied that she banged the baseball(?) dude in his house.Can someone tell me if she’s banged anyone else since shes banged mc the first time? I remember a bunch of the guys saying it’s been forever but then there was the new timeline so idk anymore
Page 9 as well lolIs it just me, or Agawa body proportions get really messed up in page 8? Like her body become 80% leg or something
Is the author okay? Lol
The story has lost the plot a long time ago. Not sure what we are doing at this point. I can kind of see where the author is trying to tell this story now but so far it isn’t landing very well.Authors all over the place since the timeliness change.
MC doesn't seem to be doing anything to either be with Agawa or stay away and finish his education.
Agawa seems to be playing chaotic evil. Jealous of MC either Akito but not interested enough to make him hers only. Corrupting Akito just for fun. Seriously thought she was going to teach Akito about sex.
Akito seems to be here for no reason.. while she seems to love MC author doesn't seem to want to make that an interesting main story beat.
This is off the rails and the story just gets messier with each chapter. The art also seems to be going down hill as well.
Maybe the hentai story was the best plot and author doesn't know how to make it work outside of an adult version.
Yeah, that's what I meant.I don't believe they were saying that he doesn't have editors, it's that he isn't at the mercy of them. As seen in his message where he announces the retcons, he basically just annoyed his editor until he got his way.
What he needs is an editor that knows how to tell him no, and if he continues to press for stupid shit, will beat him with a wrench.
Women am I rightShe doesn't make any sense. She rejects him, and then gets jealous, and then she's goading the same girl she got jealous of to fuck him.