This seems completely disjointed.
Like, the main character seems to react to the deaths more strongly when he thought that they were fake, while going "Wow, I sure can't believe that." when finding out that they actually died for realsies.
Also, I am not sure what the point was of informing the participants that badly.
Like, you, as a morally dubious megacorp do want them to bring you that mcguffin resource, right? In that case, not properly vetting them and letting them drop like flies and casually commit teamkilling seems really counterproductive to that. Even if the "Oh, we don't take any responsibility for your deaths" kinda should've been a giveaway that death was a possibility, but it seems an evil that doesn't even raise stock prices, like, c'mon!?
Also yeah, massive minus points for killing the girl after making her look hot