Death Preparation Hero - Ch. 2 - Interacting with the Young Brings Vitality

Dex-chan lover
Joined
Oct 20, 2019
Messages
312
Thanks for the chapter!

Edit suggestion: @DrtLckd
  • p18 For now, taking him hostage -> For now, taking this guy hostage [right now, "him" incorrectly refers to the "old man" in the sentence before, not to the tsundere newbie]
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jul 25, 2023
Messages
314
So basically we got not old himmel and not rimuru as our main duo protag.
 
  • Like
Reactions: le3
Group Leader
Joined
Nov 11, 2020
Messages
94
Thanks for the chapter!

Edit suggestion: @DrtLckd
  • p18 For now, taking him hostage -> For now, taking this guy hostage [right now, "him" incorrectly refers to the "old man" in the sentence before, not to the tsundere newbie]
Thanks, just did the fix. I initially thought it was referring to the hero, after you pointed it out, it made more sense for it to be Tori 😅
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top