Dekisokonai to Yobareta Moto Eiyuu wa, Jikka Kara Tsuihousareta no de Suki Katte ni Ikiru Koto ni Shita - Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[neo_child]

Looks like they finally fixed it

 

[Subaru_69]

@neo_child lol yes XD. Join discord or we will do a release monthly

 

[sdarkpaladin]

Expected the Dragon to be someone wise. Got this PoS instead. Dragon gonna die.

 

[Rikeka]

Ah, now I can read it.

 

[Dezaki]

finally a human language i can read (there's some weird phrases in some places but still acceptable)

how did the dragon found the kid though? author should at least shown us a hint or something

 

[Subaru_69]

@Dezaki yea and those weird parts are the gaps kept by author. And if TL hinted smth it might become spoiler for next chap.

 

[endo54]

these characters lacks too much sleep

 

[NEETzReader]

Is everyone in this manga have sleep depravation or something?

 

[Siikalahna]

Again, what the hell is with all this "blah blah blah, I kill you, blah blah blah, then a hundred chapters later, still going blah blah blah"? Just fucking kill, why the fuck are you blabbering like a moron?
@NEETzReader With how much bullshit they keep on spouting, I doubt they've had any time to sleep as talking seems to be the only thing they do, 24/7, apart from that couple of images where they "fight" and then continue on blabbering...

 

[Mogima]

1 thing i don't get is why they all looks like they have amnesia

 

[SilverSun]

did the author feels like the story would be too childish if no one died?

 

[icarushector]

Much better, still feels a little odd in places but that doesn't seem to be the translation at fault anymore.

 

[aberdeus]

@Siikalahna wow you can see into the future?

 

[Zephyrum_Alsend]

I'm writing as I'm reading, so it'll be updated as I go further along:

pg14, the whispering in panel 1: it feels transliterated. It gets the meaning and intent across, but doesn't read fluently in English. Particularly bubble 3; 1 and 2 are fine. I'd say the repeated use of "that" makes the sentence feel both redundant and vague.

pg18, in reference to the TL note: "Let's do this!" is an equivalent English phrase.

And finished chapter.

 

[chendu]

It's aLive !!!!

 

[Optimist]

The art and story structure is not very good.

 

[boag]

This reads like absolute cancer.

I was the hero, but iwas so sad, so i asked to be reincarnated
but they made me a noble and that was bad i wanted a peaceful life
and i was considered a failure im still op
Now i have a harem

This is the type of shit you see posted by a 12 YO on deviant art.

 

[icekatze]

With regards to the translator's note, some possible English equivalents.
• Let's do this! (Leeeeroy Jenkins!)
• Let's rock and roll!

With honorable mentions to:
• Let's blow this popsicle stand!
• Three, two, one, let's jam.
• Shake a leg.
• Allons-y.
😛

 

[Luijs]

Now this is readable! Thanks for redoing!
Love the brutal dragon btw...