Demon Instructor at the Royal Academy of Magic - Ch. 7

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I'm not interested in what the MC wants or what the girls are like, but after all this time I'm not going to give up on this shitty author writing something... Anything. These battle chapters are not writing at all.
 
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i would like to see others sin as well, what crazy idea the author has about them, and the theory about light magic and vampire is interesting as well
 
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He turns his students into slaves, lol I thought he was suppose to be teaching them a lesson as a teacher?

This kinda reeks of an incel's power revenge fantasy about punishing girls they can't even be brave enough to talk to.
he needs to or else they won't listen maybe lol
 
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Yeah, I can see everyone here is in agreement about the pacing - this entire 7 chapter arc felt like it should have been just one single introductory chapter, this is made worse by what seems like a monthly schedule rather than weekly, so the entire thing feels as if it's plodding along overwhelmingly slowly (and I had the advantage of reading it all in one go just now). None of this is the artist's fault mind you, it's purely writing, which I can barely judge because we haven't even gotten a plot yet, outside of fighting and tits!

The most damning thing about it is, who are these girls? Why do they hate this guy so much? Who even is he? This incredibly long, high stakes fight is completely de-fanged because we don't care about any character or know about the world or give a shit about anything - and it's been like that FOR 7 CHAPTERS, FOR 7 MONTHS!

The author should be thanking god that it wasn't canceled during the first fight, he might have chance to redeem this thing, but this is definitely one of the most incompetent starts (if you can still call 7 chapters a "start") I've seen for any piece of media.
I can't believe the writing and art are two separate people given how this is going so far.
 

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