From the 1st chapter till the current chapter, I feel like am getting silly. Don't know why the connection between the last page of the previous chapter to the 1st page of the next chapter is getting faint, its like the story isn't connected at all. The dialogues, the drawing, everything's make me jumbled.
At first I thought this will be a good one, but why.... Just why.... Oh author, please fix your habit. It's make me headache.
And good work for the cliffhanger...