Denjin N - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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Some bullying scenes are good made some are very poorly made like this one.
 
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Typo on page 20: "I brought delivery ..." >> "I brought a delivery ..."
Typo on page 21: "Rlly?" >> "Really?"
Typo on page 22: "... and run away" >> "... and ran away"
Typos on page 27:
powerfull >> powerful
tutition >> tuition
Typo on page 28: Nosebleed >> The nosebleed
Typo on page 30: to teachers >> to the teachers
Also on page 30:
Instead of "it seems they do some something" >> "they may do something", it sounds better.
And "I give you this" >> "You can keep it" sounds better
On page 30:
"Last person who ..." >> "The last person who ..."
"This one?" >> "That one?"
Typo on page 44: failiure >> failure
Typo on page 62: "Shutter is clo.." >> "The shutter is clo.."
 
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Shouldn't have put his mother in detox while knowing that she's still drinking while in medication. That's a money pit you'll never fill.
pretty decent translation thanks for translating!
 

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