Dirty Thirty ♡ Magical Girl - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - What if a 35 year old single woman became a magical girl part 2

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Look, I get why you're trying to include "hopping" in every one of his sentences, but you're trying so hard to incorporate his gobi that I feel like it's warping your ability to just convey what the bunny is saying. I'd take ending more sentences with just a random "hop" over every hopping sentence being twisted to include a hopping minced oath.
I just rePlace every hop with fuck and it makes it funnier
 
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i am looking forward to the end of the manga when she beats the rabbit's ass
 
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I would have killed the bunny before it got to this point. If not personally, i would have gotten the villain to do it in exchange for the wishy thing.
 
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I mean, she could be 25 and it would be the same.
Someone only 25 shouldn't have been desperate enough to marry a hopping fairy bunny though (which judging by the final page is basically what she did - and the bunny keeps being a chauvinist pig like before)
 
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Someone only 25 shouldn't have been desperate enough to marry a hopping fairy bunny though (which judging by the final page is basically what she did - and the bunny keeps being a chauvinist pig like before)
I think I was talking about her appearance... But it looks like you're right and I wasn't thinking hard enough.
 
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I think I was talking about her appearance... But it looks like you're right and I wasn't thinking hard enough.
I have read on a couple chapters since I made that post, and supposedly you're reasonably spot on with the appearance estimate (at least for the untrained eye, even if not for a professional ogler).
 

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