I quite liked this, it may be surreal and dream like, but it has a story and through line that you can follow easily - the story would have worked without the last lines about leaving her psychotherapy cured, but that was just the bow on top tying everything together.
So many stories that try to be weird or 'surreal' are just nonsensical and impenetrable, and are frankly poorly written, but it's "okay" because that was the supposed intention. Bleh!
