Dora - Oneshot

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If you're confused....well, that's dreams for ya...doesn't make a damn sense to anyone except the dreamer.
 
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I quite liked this, it may be surreal and dream like, but it has a story and through line that you can follow easily - the story would have worked without the last lines about leaving her psychotherapy cured, but that was just the bow on top tying everything together. :meguu:

So many stories that try to be weird or 'surreal' are just nonsensical and impenetrable, and are frankly poorly written, but it's "okay" because that was the supposed intention. Bleh! :pout:
 

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