Dorei Senshi no Isekai Taneuma Seikatsu ~Mahou mo Bujutsu mo Saikyou Dashi Harem made!?~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 6 - Hunch of Turmoil

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Dude, who do you expect to decipher that wall of text in super-condensed all-caps and idiotically noisy background? Why not mirror it, too? Make it a GIF, even, let it flicker rapidly between normal and inverted colors, why don't you? I'm sure we can increase the eyebleed level even more!
 
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Thanks for the translation! And glad you’re enjoying the process. You picked a great one to start with.

I do agree though, for TL notes at the end, use higher contrast between the background and the text. It is very difficult to read.
 
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I have complete faith that the MC will be able to save her life with his magic/modern knowledge. Only one guess what who his reward will be.
 
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I knew he wouldn't be a good guard, his occupation is to pull down his pants and slap his meat against beautiful slave privates. It's a very necessary job for a princess to have that guy. I think. But bad for learning how to protect the president.
 
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Reading this made me appreciate just how undervalued the TypeSetter's job is :dogkek: thanks to all the TS out there who can actually do a good job
I've done a variety of jobs and I'll tell you now that cleaners deserve the most respect and get the least, followed not too far behind by typesetters. Cleaning is drudgework, and done well you basically never notice it, it's only when the cleaner fucks up that you realise how bad it is without them.
 
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"If sooo...."
I don't think this means what you think it means. The translation doesn't quite flow right. I think it was meant to be something more along the lines of "As you wish.", or something similar.
 
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At this point whenever I hear "English is not my first language" I just get the biggest eyeroll ever. Like that is an excuse to be ass at it.

The problem with this work is not the English, but almost everything other than that. You might've gotten away with some bad grammar here and there, but what is that picture quality?

Chapter 3 looked like it was sexually violated. It's so bad. As a cherry on top you made the text slightly readable (it should've been more unreadable)

And you put this work on Patreon? You said you needed funds for volume 3 and 4 and you're going to work on volume 2? Brother, volume 2 isn't even out yet lol. Volume 1 was released almost two years ago. And volume 2 is STILL not out. But you're preparing for volume 3 and 4.

"volume 1 is almost about to end so I will paywall the last two chapters so anybody who doesn't pay me doesn't get to read it, and depending on how many dolleroos I get I will start working on the nonexistent volume 2"

Lowest tier on his patreon is $5
Chapters for this manga are like 70 cents

scum ultra pro max
 

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