Dorei Tensei: Sono Dorei, Saikyou no Moto Ouji ni Tsuki - Vol. 13 Ch. 116 - Slave, Setting Out on a New Adventure

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Well that was an irritating end. Just leave your people behind. They can self-govern and there's not gonna be any power vacuum while you're on another continent in buttfuck wheresville. What a carefree royal you turned out to be.
 
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Thx for the translation :D
quite an enjoyable read , now lets see whats gonna happen next
Dorei Tensei 2 or something idk :dogkek:
 
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Sooooo....
What was the taboo?
Who did Irs!Ars fuck to have son? Like I was sure for like half of the manga that the son was the "guru" or whatever the heresy cult leader was.
What even was that whole heresy shtick when they meet like 1 town for 1 chapter where people said "fuck the goddess" and lived with the alchemy dolls of their loved ones.
It would have been ok to just explain it all in some few-pages long infodump instead of the whole "we are going on an adventure!". Like seriously, Merry Grave made it's last chapter (after axe) much better than this series with proper 2-part epilogue. There was no dialogue/narration and yet you could extrapolate from the pics how it would end and the plot twists.
This series needed a simple structure
1) Wals says that he will return after discovering the truth beyond "taboo", Seletia becomes the queen
2) some pages with his adventures while explaining where he went and what he discovered
3) some stand-off with the last dragon and the final explanation behind "taboo", maybe some talk with the God/Death about his resurrection magic
4) MC returns to his country, marries FeMC and fuggs Neiya and Fiel. Or at least show them all with children.
A fairy is fine too. I know that they are quite stretchy thanks to the holy scriptures
 
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Read for few hours and finished.


True antagonist was shocking, ending leave a lot unfinished threads.
 
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...... Ooooooohhhh-kay?

Seems we're not resolving the dragons (who he just called "observers," yeeks!), nor the "taboo," nor the wifing, and none of the ecchi.

If there's a continuation, there better be some elfbangs, or at least basic seggs of some type.
 
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Page 22: pretty much a proposal but MC as always, is too dense.

But seriously, 20~30% were fun, 40~60% were tiresome to read, and lastly, ~10% of it were epic.
 
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welp, at least it has an ending with the villains destroyed and the world is at peace.

Much better than just getting axed while the villain still chilling messing up the world in the background, like oh so many fantasy/isekai adaptations out there.
 
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Was my favorite series for a little bit, but the entirety of the plot after a about chapter 60 goes to high hell. So many loose ends and bullshit explanations. Warrior slave dude put a poison flower like a walls would just go and touch one??? And even if then what would he gain? Not even gonna get started on dragons and taboo because so many people already have. And I have read erotica manga with better final chapters, big bads, and twists. Absolutely loved the early to mid almost everything, but story has some serious problems.
 

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